Thursday, November 28, 2013

Large Render Final Test

I increased the size of the glass components and smoothed them for better readability.

2 comments:

  1. Great...deleted my long comment and have to write it again...
    OK, so:
    I would suggest a couple of things:
    1: Use a wider angle in the camera settings, 18mm maybe 14mm. Gives your image more dynamics.
    2: I think that this rendering of your from Midterms should be the template for the final rendering: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-JWGPFHwxXqE/UmVGaW8-z0I/AAAAAAAAACs/Oh3YnnWtQmA/s1600/PERS_1_rendering.jpg

    3: Your color scheme looks bland. Remember the red blue swirly render you showed me? Thats spot on! Only the color scheme was a bit too much. This rendering tells a very interesting story about repetitive components camouflaged by vague coloration schemes. It trun your building into a conversation about repetition and vague perception concepts. You basically camouflage your building to act as a body of fog. Highly interesting!
    Also your whole concept of larger and smaller components gravitate around the concept of the bouquet as mode of organization of space.

    For color schemes I would rely on the following (individual components generating a differentiated color scheme, also the swirls you made could still work, just with these colors:

    http://www.windermereflowersandgifts.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/ombre-flowers.jpg

    http://www.wholeblossoms.com/images/Pink-Centerpiece-Gerberas-Lilies.jpg

    http://www.weddingflowersandreceptionideas.com/media/images/centerpieces/flower-centerpieces/how-to-make-centerpieces-1002.jpg

    http://bios.weddingbee.com/pics/100585/my_wedding_bouquet.jpg

    http://img4-1.realsimple.timeinc.net/images/0905/lead-cabbage-flowers_300.jpg

    Another thing: Your building can be described as a bouquet made of glass and concrete.
    http://image0-rubylane.s3.amazonaws.com/shops/victoriandreams/1143.1L.jpg?40

    http://www.msbijouxbeads.com/images/springmix/mothersday_bouquet1.jpg

    http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/coleong/coleong0611/coleong061100240/614095-a-breathtaking-display-of-2-000-hand-blown-glass-flowers--the-fiori-di-como-created-by-world-renowne.jpg

    http://shard3.1stdibs.us.com/archivesE/1stdibs/050613/Paulmarra_CC_DM//1/X.jpg

    Check out more of the Lobmayr Chandeliers on Google Images....very inspiring...

    OK, let me know what you think..

    Matias

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  2. Another thing: Your connections that come out of the mouth of your component are turning into columns. Please rethink this. Also they block the possible view down to the plaza that we discussed. Are this connections really necessary? What do you think?

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