Thesis Prep Seminar - Matias del Campo -
University of Michigan - 2015
"Moody Objects" examines aspects of atmosphere, ambience and mood. A set of specific lenses serve as the mechanisms of observation for speculations and obsessions which rely on techniques such as Boolean operations, symmetry and computational crafting.
Thursday, November 28, 2013
Large Render Final Test
I increased the size of the glass components and smoothed them for better readability.
Great...deleted my long comment and have to write it again... OK, so: I would suggest a couple of things: 1: Use a wider angle in the camera settings, 18mm maybe 14mm. Gives your image more dynamics. 2: I think that this rendering of your from Midterms should be the template for the final rendering: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-JWGPFHwxXqE/UmVGaW8-z0I/AAAAAAAAACs/Oh3YnnWtQmA/s1600/PERS_1_rendering.jpg
3: Your color scheme looks bland. Remember the red blue swirly render you showed me? Thats spot on! Only the color scheme was a bit too much. This rendering tells a very interesting story about repetitive components camouflaged by vague coloration schemes. It trun your building into a conversation about repetition and vague perception concepts. You basically camouflage your building to act as a body of fog. Highly interesting! Also your whole concept of larger and smaller components gravitate around the concept of the bouquet as mode of organization of space.
For color schemes I would rely on the following (individual components generating a differentiated color scheme, also the swirls you made could still work, just with these colors:
Another thing: Your building can be described as a bouquet made of glass and concrete. http://image0-rubylane.s3.amazonaws.com/shops/victoriandreams/1143.1L.jpg?40
Another thing: Your connections that come out of the mouth of your component are turning into columns. Please rethink this. Also they block the possible view down to the plaza that we discussed. Are this connections really necessary? What do you think?
Great...deleted my long comment and have to write it again...
ReplyDeleteOK, so:
I would suggest a couple of things:
1: Use a wider angle in the camera settings, 18mm maybe 14mm. Gives your image more dynamics.
2: I think that this rendering of your from Midterms should be the template for the final rendering: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-JWGPFHwxXqE/UmVGaW8-z0I/AAAAAAAAACs/Oh3YnnWtQmA/s1600/PERS_1_rendering.jpg
3: Your color scheme looks bland. Remember the red blue swirly render you showed me? Thats spot on! Only the color scheme was a bit too much. This rendering tells a very interesting story about repetitive components camouflaged by vague coloration schemes. It trun your building into a conversation about repetition and vague perception concepts. You basically camouflage your building to act as a body of fog. Highly interesting!
Also your whole concept of larger and smaller components gravitate around the concept of the bouquet as mode of organization of space.
For color schemes I would rely on the following (individual components generating a differentiated color scheme, also the swirls you made could still work, just with these colors:
http://www.windermereflowersandgifts.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/ombre-flowers.jpg
http://www.wholeblossoms.com/images/Pink-Centerpiece-Gerberas-Lilies.jpg
http://www.weddingflowersandreceptionideas.com/media/images/centerpieces/flower-centerpieces/how-to-make-centerpieces-1002.jpg
http://bios.weddingbee.com/pics/100585/my_wedding_bouquet.jpg
http://img4-1.realsimple.timeinc.net/images/0905/lead-cabbage-flowers_300.jpg
Another thing: Your building can be described as a bouquet made of glass and concrete.
http://image0-rubylane.s3.amazonaws.com/shops/victoriandreams/1143.1L.jpg?40
http://www.msbijouxbeads.com/images/springmix/mothersday_bouquet1.jpg
http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/coleong/coleong0611/coleong061100240/614095-a-breathtaking-display-of-2-000-hand-blown-glass-flowers--the-fiori-di-como-created-by-world-renowne.jpg
http://shard3.1stdibs.us.com/archivesE/1stdibs/050613/Paulmarra_CC_DM//1/X.jpg
Check out more of the Lobmayr Chandeliers on Google Images....very inspiring...
OK, let me know what you think..
Matias
Another thing: Your connections that come out of the mouth of your component are turning into columns. Please rethink this. Also they block the possible view down to the plaza that we discussed. Are this connections really necessary? What do you think?
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